content/_index.en.md

@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ Our core principles are:
   </dd>
   <dt>
     <img src="/static/img/icons/zero-knowledge.svg" />
-    Zero-knowledge
+    Zero knowledge
   </dt>
   <dd>
     Whenever possible, we ensure that a system administrator does not have technical ability to access member data.

content/about.en.md

@@ -8,10 +8,10 @@ We - the members of the cooperative - own our own data.
 
 In practice, this means that we:
 
- * Own our own hardware
- * We only use Open Source Software
+ * ...own our own hardware
+ * ...only use Open Source Software
 
-The cooperative owns 2 rack services, of which one of them is currently in use.
+The cooperative owns 2 rack servers, of which one is in use and one is spare.
 
 You can find us here:
 

content/membership.en.md

@@ -2,11 +2,11 @@
 title: Become a member
 ---
 
-[data.coop](https://data.coop) is a cooperative build as a democratic association.
+[data.coop](https://data.coop) is a cooperative established as a democratic association.
 The members decide on the association's operations and how data should be governed.
-This happens as in any classic association: Through legal statutes and formal assemblies.
+Governance resembles any classic association: We have legal statutes and formal general assemblies.
 
-You need to read our [statues](/rights/) and our 
+You need to read our [statutes](/rights/) and our 
 [Acceptable Usage Policy (AUP)](https://git.data.coop/data.coop/dokumenter/src/branch/main/Acceptable%20Usage%20Policy.md)
 before becoming a member.
 If you have questions, you can find us on [Matrix og IRC](/about/) or [send an email to the board](mailto:board@data.coop).
@@ -16,9 +16,11 @@ Many parts of this organization are already in English,
 but our legal documents are not (yet).
 Please write us if you have any questions.
 
-You become a member by transferring the annual membership fee to our account *and* sending an email 
+You become a member by paying the annual membership fee to our account *and* sending an email 
 to our treasurer [benjaoming@data.coop](mailto:benjaoming@data.coop), containing your name.
 
+Currently, the only option is to wire a bank payment to our Danish bank account:
+
 * Reg. 8401 (Merkur)
 * Kontonr. 1016866 
 * Text: First name + last name
@@ -27,4 +29,4 @@ Annual membership: **DKK 300** (or more)\
 Reduced annual membership (students/unemployed): **DKK 50**
 
 The membership period counts from *association year* that you sign up in.
-That means that a membership is valid until and including the next general assembly.
+That means that a membership is valid from when it's paid and until and including the next general assembly.

data/badges/en/badges.yaml

@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ badges:
     icon: encrypted-data-storage.svg
 
   zero_knowledge:
-    name: Zero-knowledge
+    name: Zero knowledge
     description: |
       *You have the only key.*
       
@@ -69,7 +69,7 @@ badges:
     description: |
       Services with anonymous access can be used without registration and authentication.
       This means that the service can be used anonymously without sharing personal information.
-      Some services may have limited access for un-registered users.
+      Some services may have limited access for unregistered users.
       This may be relevant for instance for a service where a registered user can upload a file
       and an unregistered user can download the file.
     icon: anonymous-access.svg