From d13a6df4d2d0d2386b7c180f03ef7829198eb651 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Rasmus Date: Sat, 7 Jul 2018 17:31:48 +0200 Subject: [PATCH] Update text to 1 mio goal --- _pages/index-da.md | 6 +++--- _pages/index-en.md | 8 +++----- 2 files changed, 6 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-) diff --git a/_pages/index-da.md b/_pages/index-da.md index 243135bc..41d035df 100644 --- a/_pages/index-da.md +++ b/_pages/index-da.md @@ -10,9 +10,9 @@ sections: Vi er en broget flok af privatlivsentusiaster og menneskerettighedsforekæmpere der nu går til domstolene med simpelt budskab: Overhold loven og respektér vores fundamentale rettigheder! - Da vi nåede vores første delmål, 100.000 kr, skrev vores advokater en udførlig stævning. Med pengene fra det næste delmål, 250.000 kr, har vi råd til at stævne justitsminister Søren Pape. Vi er dog ikke i mål endnu. + Da vi nåede vores første delmål, 100.000 kr., skrev vores advokater en udførlig stævning. Med pengene fra de næste delmål, 250.000 og 400.000 kr., har vi råd til at stævne justitsminister Søren Pape. Vi er dog ikke i mål endnu. - Vi ved ikke hvor meget det vil ende med at koste, så vores næste mål er 400.000 kr. Selvom det lyder af meget, er det kun en brøkdel af hvad staten vil bruge. Det er dyrt at sikre vores rettigheder, og vi har tænkt os at gå hele vejen! + Vi ved ikke hvor meget det vil ende med at koste, så vores næste mål er en rund million. Selvom det lyder af meget, er det kun en brøkdel af hvad staten vil bruge. Det er dyrt at sikre vores rettigheder, og vi har tænkt os at gå hele vejen! - id: butwhy link: Hvorfor? heading: Hvorfor er det vigtigt? @@ -21,7 +21,7 @@ sections: Måske er du gået forbi et sted hvor der blev begået en forbrydelse. Politiet får en liste over alle der var i nærheden, og så skal du bevise at du ikke var skyldig. - Dansk politi kan rejse tiltale udelukkende på baggrund af ting du har skrevet i Facebook Messenger. Har du skrevet negative ting om danske politikere på Facebook? Måske bliver du sigtet i næste uge. + Dansk politi kan rejse tiltale og varetægtsfængsle udelukkende på baggrund af hvor din telefon har været. Måske bliver du sigtet i næste uge. - id: tellmemore link: Hvordan? heading: Jeg vil vide mere… diff --git a/_pages/index-en.md b/_pages/index-en.md index 8ca3c74c..e4bc25d5 100644 --- a/_pages/index-en.md +++ b/_pages/index-en.md @@ -23,18 +23,16 @@ sections: link: How? heading: Tell me more! content: | - The movement began when Rasmus Malver asked his phone company, TDC, for a copy of their retained data. When the company finally delivered the data, it was evident that they had retained data illegally. The Telecom Industry Association of Denmark had publically claimed that they were opposed to violating human rights. Malver decided to call their bluff, and when presented with a draft subpœna TDC disowned the association's statement. - - Attempting to justify their illegal actions, the Telecom Association published a letter from the minister of justice, Søren Pape Poulsen, telling them to disregard the law. + The Danish telecom industry is still retaining data, in violation of the human rights of their customers. Attempting to justify their illegal actions, the Telecom Association have published a letter from the minister of justice, Søren Pape Poulsen, telling them to disregard the law. - The case could still be brought against the phone companies, but with this letter, they have a better case for arguing ignorance (although that is [technically a moot point](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ignorantia_juris_non_excusat)). However, the actions of the minister are so grave that, in consultation with our attorneys, we have decided to file suit against the state instead. A democratic society cannot tolerate officials threatening citizens and companies with prosecution if they honor the law. + The minister's letter had no legal foundation, and we have decided to file suit against the state. A democratic society cannot tolerate officials threatening citizens and companies with prosecution if they honor the law. - id: wannahelp link: Help us! heading: I want to help! content: | You can contact spokesperson [Rasmus Malver](https://twitter.com/rasmusmalver) on [Twitter](https://twitter.com/rasmusmalver) or via [SMS/Signal](sms:+4526809424). - You can also transfer money to . We also accept bitcoins on and Mobile Pay to 40456. We have already reached 175.000 DKK, but we still need your help! The next goal is 250.000 DKK. + You can also transfer money to . We also accept bitcoins on and Mobile Pay to 40456. We have already reached 450.000 DKK, but we still need your help! The next goal is 1.000.000 DKK. The designated attorney for the Danish government, Kammeradvokaten, has access to unlimited means. When your main customer prints their own money, you are free to charge a substantial sum.