From 311e9c76a3f550f196a2ac36851b7887c2421d2a Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: =?UTF-8?q?Alexander=20F=C3=A6r=C3=B8y?= <ahf@0x90.dk>
Date: Thu, 11 Feb 2016 22:43:59 +0100
Subject: [PATCH] More rephrasing.

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 bornhack/templates/frontpage.html | 16 ++++++++--------
 1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)

diff --git a/bornhack/templates/frontpage.html b/bornhack/templates/frontpage.html
index bed1188a..3767e7fc 100644
--- a/bornhack/templates/frontpage.html
+++ b/bornhack/templates/frontpage.html
@@ -9,9 +9,9 @@
   </h1>
   <hr />
   <p class="lead">
-    <strong>Bornhack</strong> is a camp where hackers, makers and people with
-    an interest in technology come together for a week to celebrate technology,
-    socialise and <strong>have fun</strong>.
+    <strong>Bornhack</strong> is a 7 day, outdoor, camp where hackers, makers
+    and people with an interest in technology and security come together to
+    celebrate technology, socialise, learn and <strong>have fun</strong>.
   </p>
 
   <p class="lead">
@@ -27,11 +27,11 @@
   </p>
 
   <p class="lead">
-    We hope you will show interest by signing onto our mailing-list as
-    soon as we get it up. In the meantime you are very welcome to ask questions
-    and show your interest on IRC at <strong>#bornhack</strong> on
-    <strong>6nbtgccn5nbcodn3.onion:6697</strong> or
-    <strong>irc.baconsvin.org:6697</strong>, both using TLS.
+    We hope you will show interest by signing onto our mailing-list as soon as
+    we get it up. In the meantime you are very welcome to ask questions and
+    show your interest on IRC at <strong>#bornhack</strong> on
+    <strong>6nbtgccn5nbcodn3.onion</strong> or <strong>irc.baconsvin.org</strong>,
+    both using TLS on port 6697.
 
     That way you can help us understand what you think would be fun to do.
     This is a new event, so we don't yet know exactly where this is going - but