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@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@
 <div class="row">
    <div class="col-md-8 text-container">
         <div class="lead">
-            <b>BornHack</b> is a <b>7 day outdoor</b> tent camping festival for <b>hackers, makers</b>, and anyone interested in <b>technology and society</b>, and how the two interact.
+          <b>BornHack</b> is a 7 day outdoor tent camp where hackers, makers and people with an interest in technology or security come together to celebrate technology, socialise, learn and <b>have fun</b>.
         </div>
     </div>
     <div class="col-md-4">