fix a few typos and stuff

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Thomas Steen Rasmussen 2016-08-06 19:50:09 +02:00
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<p>
BornHack will have a wired and a wireless network. The wired
network will run with public internet addresses (v6 and v6)
network will run with public internet addresses (v4 and v6)
so you must protect yourself with a firewall at all times.
</p>
</div>
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<p>
There will be two wireless networks, one with public
addresses like the wired, and one which is behind NAT for
ipv4 a stateful firewall for ipv6. The security on the
ipv4 and a stateful firewall for ipv6. The security on the
wireless network will be EAP-TLS where any credentials
will work.
can be used. There is no user management, we just use
EAP-TLS to get the encryption it provides.
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</div>
</div>
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you should place your tent / camp / village if you expect to
make a lot of noise, especially at nighttime. Coversely the
noisy area is a bad place to stay if you value peace and
quite at night.
quiet at night.
</p>
<p>
The noisy area forms square from top left I17 to bottom
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</p>
<p>
The kiosk will also sell coffee (freshly ground quality beans)
and a selection of tea. In the mornings we will also sell bread,
see the seperate section on breakfeast.
The kiosk will also sell coffee made from freshly ground
high quality beans, and a selection of tea. In the mornings
we will also sell bread, see the seperate section on breakfeast.
</p>
<p>