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   </h1>
   <hr />
   <p class="lead">
-    <strong>Bornhack</strong> is a 7 day, outdoor, camp where hackers, makers
+    <strong>Bornhack</strong> is a 7 day outdoor camp where hackers, makers
     and people with an interest in technology and security come together to
     celebrate technology, socialise, learn and <strong>have fun</strong>.
   </p>
@@ -23,15 +23,13 @@
   <p class="lead">
     Bornhack is a <strong>participatory</strong> event where we expect people
     to come up with crazy ideas and help make the content. We will reach out to
-    people to ensure interesting, high quality, talks and workshops.
+    people to ensure interesting, high quality talks and workshops.
   </p>
 
   <p class="lead">
-    We hope you will show interest by signing onto our mailing-list as soon as
-    we get it up. In the meantime you are very welcome to ask questions and
-    show your interest on IRC at <strong>#bornhack</strong> on
-    <strong>6nbtgccn5nbcodn3.onion</strong> or <strong>irc.baconsvin.org</strong>,
-    both using TLS on port 6697.
+    You are very welcome to ask questions and show your interest on IRC at
+    <strong>#bornhack</strong> on <strong>6nbtgccn5nbcodn3.onion</strong> or
+    <strong>irc.baconsvin.org</strong>, both using TLS on port 6697.
 
     That way you can help us understand what you think would be fun to do.
     This is a new event, so we don't yet know exactly where this is going - but