diff --git a/content/django-server-sent-events.md b/content/django-server-sent-events.md
index 7ffe62a..3bb6706 100644
--- a/content/django-server-sent-events.md
+++ b/content/django-server-sent-events.md
@@ -356,7 +356,7 @@ For this we'll have to update our `stream_messages` function as follows:
 
     :::python
     async def stream_messages() -> AsyncGenerator[str, None]:
-    connection_params = connection.get_connection_params()
+        connection_params = connection.get_connection_params()
 
         # Remove the cursor_factory parameter since I can't get
         # the default from Django 4.2.1 to work.
@@ -435,9 +435,9 @@ Check out the repo for the full code where I've also added a simple form for sub
 
 ### Conclusion
 
-Django might not be the shiniest framework out there, but it is solid and boring - which is a good thing! 
-
-And with the continued work on async support, it is becoming a viable option for doing real time stuff, especially when paired with other solid and boring tech like PostgreSQL and SSE! 
+Django is boring, which is a good thing, to the degree where it is always the safe option. But with the advances in
+async support it is becoming a viable, and shiny, option for doing real time stuff. Mix in some other solid and boring 
+tech like PostgreSQL and SSE, and you end up with a very solid foundation for building real time applications.
 
 [0]: https://docs.djangoproject.com/en/4.2/releases/4.2/#requests-and-responses
 [1]: https://docs.djangoproject.com/en/4.2/ref/request-response/#django.http.StreamingHttpResponse